Life After Death + joining

[Georgiotje]

Hello everybody. I have started my own fan fiction about two weeks ago. It's called Life after Death. It's about survivors on the twelve Colonies fighting for survival. I haven't progressed very far yet, but I'm on the good path. The site I posted my story on doesn't have a lot of members though. Fewer members isn't always a problem, but if more members want to register themselves, they're always welcome. Even members from this site already registered themselves like Genji2000, Pagad and Mercer. This is the site: www.battlestarcentral.com (http://www.battlestarcentral.com)

There are a lot of different Fan Fictions on the site; including the famous Battlestar Libra, Escape of the Bellerophon, A lament for a Lacrymosa and many more. Hope to see you there soon!:thumbsup:

[Hazend]

As Georgio said so eloquently Battlestar Central (http://battlestarcentral.com/) has been around for quite a while but our numbers have remained relatively low. Of course we want to extend an open invitation to anyone wishing to join the site or just to stop by.

First and foremost we (and especially I) would not want anyone to leave this site to join ours. We feel that is innappropriate. However if anyone is interested please stop by.

There are plans in the works to expand Battlestar Central into a full service website. This, of course, will take time but the plans are in the works.

Again, thanks all.

[Georgiotje]

Don't know if anyone is reading this but I just posted two minor updates about the riots in the Capital of Tauron after they received word that other Colonies were attacked.

[Prolescum]

Hello. I read the first 3 posts, and would like to offer some criticism if I may.
I don't read much fiction, but it seems that you, (perhaps unwittingly), repeat yourself far too often; I counted no less than 6 mentions of the 'Mercury Class Battlestars' in the first few paragraphs. It's also evident elsewhere,
"Well, you know how those Government types are. Because there have been no Cylons sighted in 40 years they think the Cylons are gone forever."

"Just because the Cylons are gone for a while doesn't mean that they will be gone forever."I noticed that your grammar and punctuation also need some tweaking; a semi-colon or a hyphen here and there really makes reading a joy and allows you to direct your audience's understanding in a much more compelling way, (although, its over-use can be a burden on the reader...).
I will read the rest and let you know what I think of the story.

[Georgiotje]

I just posted a bit about the uncoming battle in the atmosphere of Tauron. I also expanded a bit of my older posts, to let them flow a bit more realistic.

[Georgiotje]

Hello. I read the first 3 posts, and would like to offer some criticism if I may.
I don't read much fiction, but it seems that you, (perhaps unwittingly), repeat yourself far too often; I counted no less than 6 mentions of the 'Mercury Class Battlestars' in the first few paragraphs. It's also evident elsewhere,
I noticed that your grammar and punctuation also need some tweaking; a semi-colon or a hyphen here and there really makes reading a joy and allows you to direct your audience's understanding in a much more compelling way, (although, its over-use can be a burden on the reader...).
I will read the rest and let you know what I think of the story.

Thank you, I am hoping to change that and I already edited some posts. It were the first posts I ever posted in a story so I wasn't really experienced. I hope that you will enjoey the rest of my story a bit better!:thumbsup:

[Georgiotje]

I recently added some background information about several military installations on Tauron. If anyone's reading this, please post comments. They're higly appreciated.:D

[Georgiotje]

Day Zero+4h, Skies above Hephaestion


Three Raptors shot through the clouds, leaving behind trails of vapor and smoke.

Captain Charlie Baynes entered the front Raptor's cockpit and looked out of the windshield towards the burning city beneath him.

"Hephaestion is finally coming into view Sir. We're landing in the eastern outskirts of the city, near a private airfield," the pilot announced.

"Notify the other Raptors, we have orders to secure small parts of the city. More strike teams are underway so we'll need to set up a safe landing zone for them."

"Roger that Sir!"


I'm posting this in the hope that it will encourage more people to read my story.

[Bluce_Ree]

"Roger that Sir!"

ACK! (dies).

[pagad]

Very constructive, Bluce :D

I'll give it a read at some point, Georgiotje.

[genji2000]

Yeah, sorry, G. Time pressures, etc. I'll try to put some time aside soon.

[Georgiotje]

Yeah, sorry, G. Time pressures, etc. I'll try to put some time aside soon.

Yeah I now everything about it.. that´s why I´m not online on this forum much.. don´t have a lot of time on my hands anymore.. and it´s not specifically meant for you guys, but for the entire forum. Just hope that people will like my story:thumbsup:;)

"Roger that Sir!"

ACK! (dies).

:lol:

Very constructive, Bluce :D

I'll give it a read at some point, Georgiotje.

How´s your story progressing btw?

[pagad]

Slowly.

And by slowly, I mean very slowly.

Should have some more done this week.